Fans on Fire

Log in if you want to, I guess.

    Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Share
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:12 pm

    I shall now win this thread.

    The Wrath of Ecko

    War of elements
    Water against the Sun
    The Sun leading a battle of the war
    that will never be done

    Sucking the weight of water
    Bringing its weakness back
    Now possessing an important weapon
    The weight that all molecules lack

    The water gets up to the sky
    People flying as wind goes by
    The seeds of
    their hate never die
    Everything's too late
    The earth will be gone
    All because of the rage of the Sun

    You were born by
    Fourteen Four-regional Dimensions
    Their milt and spawn gave your life of various alterations

    You know there's no god or belial
    Your mission's to show the only way is denial Denial...

    All christians and satanists you see must be crucified before they flee
    You're allowed to eat every soul
    You avoid it, they are too foul
    You know there's no god or belial
    Your mission's to show the only way is denial
    Still Unnamed ---

    Strange feeling in your stomach
    like a pressure from beneath
    Stench of vomit - what a feeling
    like pungent ecstasy

    Almost flying to the toilet
    trying to puke something green
    But your stomach wants to get inside your mouth with large
    intestine

    You see your bowels in the air
    approaching the ceiling like tentacles
    Dying like your father when he was young
    Flying out of this world to another land...

    The incarnation of Ecko
    A creature from below
    Your destiny is to be it
    After eating of your soul

    You feel its cold limb
    It's soon you, you're sooner him
    Transformation... Degeneration...
    Now you're the creature
    The incarnation of All Eckos
    Your purpose in life is to imitate sounds and find
    your follower

    After too many dimensions
    arriving to the last one
    A road covered with the dying
    Shadows masticating them

    Walking ahead
    Torture spreading on the way
    Dismembered human beings
    Flying souls fading away

    You find no escape
    Walking just around and around
    Flying shadows slaying and torturing
    Will they also rip your soul away...?

    Lie... Walls full of eyes
    Staring you, whispering lies
    You're not justified to die
    But they want you to eat yourself alive

    Punished in the Chamber of eyes
    "Show your allegiance. Munch yourself, be our servant forever"

    Forever... With tears in your eyes you start to masticate
    Those whispering eyes, no more silent,
    Laughing at your fate

    In the backyard
    you see a white stain
    Nevertheless, looking unreal
    like a tiny passage to emptiness

    Thinking of touching the thing
    you kneel over it
    Interest exceeding carefulness
    you'll be soon in pieces in nothingness...

    The parts of the fingers you put in the hole
    are now taken to another dimension
    It's enlarging itself with the power you gave
    Now a metre wide, you'll be dead in a while

    Ruthless...

    Now you have no feet
    The thing has become ten metres wide
    You can hear its masticating
    and the silent, ironic laughter

    Another victim suffering
    You pray to god
    Your screaming won't stop until your mouth has been
    teleported thoroughly

    Ecko lived on a silent forsaken planet
    It's pores full of flesh
    It once used to be alive
    Now dead, condemned to loneliness

    Lying in space, completely alone
    Covered with tons and tons of piles of bone
    The former master of the Universe and
    its stars
    The former master died its cover full of scars
    Its core has gotten cool
    The greed has shown fatality
    No more absorbing, no consuming
    It will never reach immortality

    From a tangled dream
    you awake because of a silent cry
    A cry from somewhere outside
    your mind and your comprehension

    Somehow attractive like the call
    of sirens leading you to your death
    The cry makes you leave your home
    and walk towards your painful end

    All people gathered around
    the monument of endlessness
    The flying tears and the sound
    detach your mind and flesh

    Without warning the tears turn into blood
    and crying stops, ear-ripping screaming starts
    You feel only pain like everyone else
    until your head and brain blow away...

    Cleft on a pyramid
    has shown you a secret passage
    You carelessly force your way in
    Smell of death frightens ruthlessly

    A sentence of cipher
    An unknown, forgotten language
    You decipher it as a name
    but don't know it welcomes you to death

    You are damned...

    Many dangers
    have wounded you and your friends
    Some embalmed corpses
    have blinked their eyes - no, that's an illusion

    But you feel there's something wrong
    You've seen too many corpses
    Maybe this is a mass tomb
    If not you know you'll never be back

    You are doomed...

    More and more corpses
    Some of them dismembered
    and every member embalmed
    Now you are horrified to death...

    You are doomed...

    You enter a hall
    Thousands of corpses lying there
    Stench smarting your nose
    Horror paralyzing all the thoughts

    Suddenly all the corpses awake
    You're trying to escape
    But soon you'll be one of them
    Sleeping embalmed beauty sleep...
    avatar
    LordHardware
    Citizen

    LordHardware Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1952
    Location : Melbourne, Australia

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by LordHardware on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:15 pm

    nice, Find and Replace huh?
    avatar
    Glue
    Goer of hardness

    Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1290
    Location : Roanoke, VA

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Glue on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:19 pm

    Wat.


    ___________________________
    lordhardware wrote:AAAAIIIIGGHHHHT!

    After I finish my Oral,

    Lolgayjoke.
    avatar
    LordHardware
    Citizen

    LordHardware Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1952
    Location : Melbourne, Australia

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by LordHardware on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:23 pm

    Stop it ecko!

    you commenting after me means i never get a poem Razz
    avatar
    Glue
    Goer of hardness

    Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1290
    Location : Roanoke, VA

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Glue on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:24 pm

    K.


    ___________________________
    lordhardware wrote:AAAAIIIIGGHHHHT!

    After I finish my Oral,

    Lolgayjoke.
    avatar
    LordHardware
    Citizen

    LordHardware Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1952
    Location : Melbourne, Australia

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by LordHardware on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:25 pm

    Razz bastard
    avatar
    Zmannnn
    Member

    Posts : 54

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Zmannnn on Mon Sep 14, 2009 11:35 pm

    YOU ALREADY HAVE A POEM
    avatar
    LordHardware
    Citizen

    LordHardware Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1952
    Location : Melbourne, Australia

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by LordHardware on Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:38 am

    lol and?

    Ecko has 8ish
    avatar
    Jama7301
    Dedicated Member

    1000 posts?  Damn straight! Posts : 1300
    Location : Minnesota

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Jama7301 on Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:36 am

    LordHardware, meet Zmannnn
    He's a friend of yours I'm sure
    I wonder if you'll meet 'em
    Upon a watery shore.
    avatar
    LordHardware
    Citizen

    LordHardware Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1952
    Location : Melbourne, Australia

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by LordHardware on Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:01 am

    Jama you're insistent

    you crazy catwood cop

    your rhymes are non-existent

    your tone is flat from top

    to bottom, this poem attacks you

    from every side but still

    your rhymes, pathetic, haunt you

    I know I've had my fill.
    avatar
    KTownEgghead
    Member

    Posts : 124
    Location : Forum Deletion Inc. HQ

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by KTownEgghead on Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:38 am

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Lordhardware is sexy
    and from Melbourne too.
    avatar
    BSRaven
    True Member

    BSRaven Fans on Fire Original Posts : 567
    Location : In your braaaaaaainz. No really.

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by BSRaven on Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:36 am

    DELEET!
    BALEET!
    SUBMEET!
    Dis be KTown's way, so don't question eet!
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:42 pm

    Convalescent livid we succumb
    Stagnation now complete
    This is the new plague called
    BSRaven
    We're selfcaged in defeat
    Clotted minds coagulate we are trapped
    Inside the tears we obey resignate to our
    Self-inflected fears

    Voices calm will be never heard
    In this mode who will change
    Bantised in our minds so absurd
    Is this the world sublime
    Into pools of paranoia we're fading with
    Reality drained by lies we are all inhuman
    Introspective vanishing

    Sterile thoughts now upraised in subhuman
    Majesty bodies numb still enchained
    Where am i in hell of our dreams
    Wrong wrong i'm in the now, the vain reality

    So it seems we're dying yet content
    Worship our chrysalis stage since when are
    Lies devine

    Since when

    This is now degrade indulge
    This is us servile obliging

    Swallowed by our hunger for mendacity
    As this dance whirls deeper into hate

    He's BSRaven

    In down deep cold where am i caught cage
    Trapped not in dreams now time has killed
    Our eyes fall fade gone dead away
    avatar
    Kermit4Prez
    Ultimate Emperor of the Universe for Life and Beyond
    Ultimate Emperor of the Universe for Life and Beyond

    1000 posts?  Damn Straight! Posts : 1304

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Kermit4Prez on Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:58 pm

    Roses and poppies are nothing but defecation in comparison to my sweet love, Electro
    The moonlight reflects like a blanket on your ample breasts
    The sky cries for you and only you
    But alas, all in jest
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:00 pm

    This twisted wretched place shadowed by the utmost darks of hell
    in dreams of black beyond the bounds of a withered witch's spell
    where the doors surely are locked when the sun threatens to wane
    where shamblers dwell in dim moon light beyond the warmth of day

    Liars line the roads at dawn watchful eyes are upon you held
    sacred weapons to the sacred revealed to be unleashed upon the council of hell
    blood flows down the streets at night where wolves cry out for flesh
    where a horrible curse taints the woodlands nearby with the forms of the walking dead

    unholy inversion of hope twisting the faith of the meek into hate
    driven insane by the dark one to bring forth the foul biddings he speaks
    the undead are among us at dawn they shrink back to their silken beds
    they dance by night and drink the blood of a child's broken neck

    Kermit's spires are growing taller still their shadows stretching throughout the land
    freeing the evils that sleep within the weaker minds of man

    into the tower never go the horrors multiply
    gears can mince the strongest ones leaving heroes paralyzed
    the rivers flow with poison the sands swallow you whole
    the ghouls that roam this darkened wood are thirsting for your throat
    avatar
    Glue
    Goer of hardness

    Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1290
    Location : Roanoke, VA

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Glue on Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:07 pm

    Roses are Red,
    Violets are Blue,
    I'll fuck you with a rake.


    ___________________________
    lordhardware wrote:AAAAIIIIGGHHHHT!

    After I finish my Oral,

    Lolgayjoke.
    avatar
    KTownEgghead
    Member

    Posts : 124
    Location : Forum Deletion Inc. HQ

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by KTownEgghead on Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:20 pm

    Ecko wrote:Roses are Red,
    Violets are Blue,
    I'll fuck you with a rake.

    Where is that from...
    avatar
    Glue
    Goer of hardness

    Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1290
    Location : Roanoke, VA

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Glue on Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:25 pm

    KTownEgghead wrote:
    Ecko wrote:Roses are Red,
    Violets are Blue,
    I'll fuck you with a rake.

    Where is that from...

    Think KTown think.


    ___________________________
    lordhardware wrote:AAAAIIIIGGHHHHT!

    After I finish my Oral,

    Lolgayjoke.
    avatar
    foxgrl93
    Member

    Posts : 58
    Location : GreatFalls Montana

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by foxgrl93 on Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:52 pm

    XD EPICNESS!

    Dear old egghead sat on a wall
    he did not realize it would lead to his fall
    For the good people of fans where severely pissed
    even Echo was shaking his fist
    As they declaired 'thats the last straw'
    electro tomato punched him in the jaw
    He tumbled down to the ground below
    And stubbed his poor fragile big toe
    And even though fans was still mad
    and egghead was gone because of his dad('s lack of internet)
    They welcomed him back to the land of frets
    once he regained his internets
    Now all are at amends
    And all at fans are back to being friends
    avatar
    Glue
    Goer of hardness

    Fans on Fire Original Posts : 1290
    Location : Roanoke, VA

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Glue on Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:11 pm

    You do this to well.


    ___________________________
    lordhardware wrote:AAAAIIIIGGHHHHT!

    After I finish my Oral,

    Lolgayjoke.
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:33 pm

    Banhammer Smashed Face

    There is something inside Ecko
    It's coming out
    He feels like banning you
    Let loose of the anger, held back too long
    His blood runs cold
    Through his anatomy, dwells another being
    Rooted in his cortex, a servant to its bidding
    Brutality becomes his appetite
    Violence is now a way of life
    The sledge his tool to torture
    As it pounds down on your forehead
    Eyes bulging from the sockets
    With every swing of his mallet
    He smashes your fucking profile in, until nothing is left
    Through the crack
    Posting privileges do leak; distorted beauty,
    Catastrophe steaming slop.
    Splattered all over him
    Lifeless profile, slouching dead
    Lecherous abcess.
    Where you once had a head
    Avoiding the prophecy of
    His new found lust
    You will never live again,
    Soon your life will end
    He'll see you die at his feet, eternally he smashes your face
    Facial bones collapse as he cracks your skull in half
    Crushing, cranal, contents
    Draining the snot, he rips out the eyes
    Squeezing them in his hands nerves are incised
    Peeling the flesh off the bottom of his weapon
    Involuntarily pulpifying facil region
    Suffer, and then you die
    Torture, pulverised
    At one with his sixth sense, he feels free
    To kill as he pleases, No one can stop him
    Created to kill, the carnage continues
    Violently reshaping human facial tissue
    Brutality becomes his appetite
    Violence is now the way of life
    The sledge his tool to torture
    As it pounds down on your forehead
    avatar
    BSRaven
    True Member

    BSRaven Fans on Fire Original Posts : 567
    Location : In your braaaaaaainz. No really.

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by BSRaven on Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:18 pm

    ELECTRO! ELECTRO!
    We call him ELECBRO!
    ELECTRO! ELECTRO!
    He ain't just for sho'!
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:37 pm

    Reaching for the inner bright, the very essence-sun of my dreaming bliss
    Guided by a fear blinded outside all shades of the perfect black
    The scattered jigsaw of my redemption laid out before my eyes
    Each piece as amorphous as the other - Each piece in its lack of shape a lie
    BSRaven - the paragon of fear, an immobile skein of tangled nerves exposed
    Hastily clawing my way into the darkest of my inner scenes of torture
    I stay my breath to escape this slavery
    I stay my breath to re-awake and face it encore
    The struggle to free myself of restraints, becomes my very shackles
    Non-physical smothering. Asphyxiation by oxygen hands
    Drowning in the endless sky. An ever-downward dive, only to surface
    the sewage of indecision, on which all sense of self is afloat
    The vortex-acceleration a constant. Resolute in purpose its choking flow
    My ignorance cast in the mold of all things absolute
    I sustain forever my gaze. A stare fixed on the distant oblivion
    Resting in the inverted state of being dead, non-sensory matter
    As all the earth, the wind, the fire, the sea, and the BSRaven behold and learn to pity me
    Mutiny of self. Insurrection games convincingly performed
    Incapacitated by physical thoughts acting out the will of tendon and bone
    Have the bridges of insanity been crossed and forever retracted?
    Am I standing among a thousand selves? Is the multitude of laughters mine alone?
    The feeding frenzy of my starving soul, gnawing voraciously at the bones,
    the exo-skeletal patchwork protecting my own reflection within;
    The twin-and-same engaged in the mirrored act of chewing away
    at the shell of my attacking self. The paradox unseen
    Treacherous this deceit to make no choice matter
    To have and yet lose yourself, until finally all reasons why are forgotten
    To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see
    Eclipse the golden mirror and the reflection is set free
    So imminently visible - this cloaked innocent guilt
    Sentenced to a lifetime, a second of structured chaos
    Trampled by the ferocious, raging crowds of solitude
    I'm the soil beneath me soaking up the sustenance of my own death
    Extradited to BSRaven, the deity of all things random
    Alive, multicolored, twitching in his dead monochrome world
    Iridescent to the searhing eyes, I'm all things vivid in a world of grey
    So easily spotted, so easily claimed in this domain where all is prey
    My thoughts a radiant beacon to the omnidirectional hunter-god radar
    I'm a markerlight of flesh to these subconscious carnivores
    I am them. I am teeth. I'm their arousal at the kill
    Feasting on self. A schizoreality warp. The contradiction fulfilled
    Focus the only means to see me back to life's unending swirl
    A reversal of passing away, as the world of dead, as away is now my origin
    I float through physical thoughts. I stare down the abyss of organic dreams
    All bets off, I plunge - Only to find that self is shed
    A lie to maintain equilibrium, to hold me in this dead realm - this last ever dream
    I'm the thought that never crossed my mind - disguised in the evident. Forever unredeemed
    A new level reached, where the absence of air lets me breathe
    I'm inverted electrical impulses. A malfunctioning death-code incomplete
    All things before me, at first unliving glimpse undeciphered
    Its semantics rid of logic. Nothing is all. All is contradiction
    Grinding, churning - the sweetest ever noises
    Decode me into their non-communication
    A soundtrack to my failure, one syllable, one vowel
    A stagnant flow of endings. Un-time unbound. Merging to form the multi-none
    A sickly dance of matter, malignantly benign. Greeting the chasm - unbearable, sublime
    Vision will blind. Severance ties. BSRaven am I. True are all lies.
    avatar
    Zpj
    Ex-Parrot

    Fans on Fire Original Zpj ZA Posts : 1540
    Location : South Africa

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Zpj on Sat Sep 19, 2009 2:14 am

    Wow, great, you can plagiarize.


    ___________________________
    avatar
    Electro Tomato
    Known Member

    Posts : 168

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Electro Tomato on Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:59 am

    Zpj wrote:Wow, great, you can plagiarize.

    That's not a poem.

    Sponsored content

    Re: Write a Poem about the user above you.

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is Fri Dec 15, 2017 8:50 am