Write a Poem about the user above you.

I shall now win this thread.

The Wrath of Ecko

War of elements
Water against the Sun
The Sun leading a battle of the war
that will never be done

Sucking the weight of water
Bringing its weakness back
Now possessing an important weapon
The weight that all molecules lack

The water gets up to the sky
People flying as wind goes by
The seeds of
their hate never die
Everything's too late
The earth will be gone
All because of the rage of the Sun

You were born by
Fourteen Four-regional Dimensions
Their milt and spawn gave your life of various alterations

You know there's no god or belial
Your mission's to show the only way is denial Denial...

All christians and satanists you see must be crucified before they flee
You're allowed to eat every soul
You avoid it, they are too foul
You know there's no god or belial
Your mission's to show the only way is denial
Still Unnamed ---

Strange feeling in your stomach
like a pressure from beneath
Stench of vomit - what a feeling
like pungent ecstasy

Almost flying to the toilet
trying to puke something green
But your stomach wants to get inside your mouth with large
intestine

You see your bowels in the air
approaching the ceiling like tentacles
Dying like your father when he was young
Flying out of this world to another land...

The incarnation of Ecko
A creature from below
Your destiny is to be it
After eating of your soul

You feel its cold limb
It's soon you, you're sooner him
Transformation... Degeneration...
Now you're the creature
The incarnation of All Eckos
Your purpose in life is to imitate sounds and find
your follower

After too many dimensions
arriving to the last one
A road covered with the dying
Shadows masticating them

Walking ahead
Torture spreading on the way
Dismembered human beings
Flying souls fading away

You find no escape
Walking just around and around
Flying shadows slaying and torturing
Will they also rip your soul away...?

Lie... Walls full of eyes
Staring you, whispering lies
You're not justified to die
But they want you to eat yourself alive

Punished in the Chamber of eyes
"Show your allegiance. Munch yourself, be our servant forever"

Forever... With tears in your eyes you start to masticate
Those whispering eyes, no more silent,
Laughing at your fate

In the backyard
you see a white stain
Nevertheless, looking unreal
like a tiny passage to emptiness

Thinking of touching the thing
you kneel over it
Interest exceeding carefulness
you'll be soon in pieces in nothingness...

The parts of the fingers you put in the hole
are now taken to another dimension
It's enlarging itself with the power you gave
Now a metre wide, you'll be dead in a while

Ruthless...

Now you have no feet
The thing has become ten metres wide
You can hear its masticating
and the silent, ironic laughter

Another victim suffering
You pray to god
Your screaming won't stop until your mouth has been
teleported thoroughly

Ecko lived on a silent forsaken planet
It's pores full of flesh
It once used to be alive
Now dead, condemned to loneliness

Lying in space, completely alone
Covered with tons and tons of piles of bone
The former master of the Universe and
its stars
The former master died its cover full of scars
Its core has gotten cool
The greed has shown fatality
No more absorbing, no consuming
It will never reach immortality

From a tangled dream
you awake because of a silent cry
A cry from somewhere outside
your mind and your comprehension

Somehow attractive like the call
of sirens leading you to your death
The cry makes you leave your home
and walk towards your painful end

All people gathered around
the monument of endlessness
The flying tears and the sound
detach your mind and flesh

Without warning the tears turn into blood
and crying stops, ear-ripping screaming starts
You feel only pain like everyone else
until your head and brain blow away...

Cleft on a pyramid
has shown you a secret passage
You carelessly force your way in
Smell of death frightens ruthlessly

A sentence of cipher
An unknown, forgotten language
You decipher it as a name
but don't know it welcomes you to death

You are damned...

Many dangers
have wounded you and your friends
Some embalmed corpses
have blinked their eyes - no, that's an illusion

But you feel there's something wrong
You've seen too many corpses
Maybe this is a mass tomb
If not you know you'll never be back

You are doomed...

More and more corpses
Some of them dismembered
and every member embalmed
Now you are horrified to death...

You are doomed...

You enter a hall
Thousands of corpses lying there
Stench smarting your nose
Horror paralyzing all the thoughts

Suddenly all the corpses awake
You're trying to escape
But soon you'll be one of them
Sleeping embalmed beauty sleep...

nice, Find and Replace huh?

Wat.

Stop it ecko!

you commenting after me means i never get a poem

K.

bastard

YOU ALREADY HAVE A POEM

lol and?

Ecko has 8ish

LordHardware, meet Zmannnn
He's a friend of yours I'm sure
I wonder if you'll meet 'em
Upon a watery shore.

Jama you're insistent

you crazy catwood cop

your rhymes are non-existent

your tone is flat from top

to bottom, this poem attacks you

from every side but still

your rhymes, pathetic, haunt you

I know I've had my fill.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Lordhardware is sexy
and from Melbourne too.

DELEET!
BALEET!
SUBMEET!
Dis be KTown's way, so don't question eet!

Convalescent livid we succumb
Stagnation now complete
This is the new plague called
BSRaven
We're selfcaged in defeat
Clotted minds coagulate we are trapped
Inside the tears we obey resignate to our
Self-inflected fears

Voices calm will be never heard
In this mode who will change
Bantised in our minds so absurd
Is this the world sublime
Into pools of paranoia we're fading with
Reality drained by lies we are all inhuman
Introspective vanishing

Sterile thoughts now upraised in subhuman
Majesty bodies numb still enchained
Where am i in hell of our dreams
Wrong wrong i'm in the now, the vain reality

So it seems we're dying yet content
Worship our chrysalis stage since when are
Lies devine

Since when

This is now degrade indulge
This is us servile obliging

Swallowed by our hunger for mendacity
As this dance whirls deeper into hate

He's BSRaven

In down deep cold where am i caught cage
Trapped not in dreams now time has killed
Our eyes fall fade gone dead away

Roses and poppies are nothing but defecation in comparison to my sweet love, Electro
The moonlight reflects like a blanket on your ample breasts
The sky cries for you and only you
But alas, all in jest

This twisted wretched place shadowed by the utmost darks of hell
in dreams of black beyond the bounds of a withered witch's spell
where the doors surely are locked when the sun threatens to wane
where shamblers dwell in dim moon light beyond the warmth of day

Liars line the roads at dawn watchful eyes are upon you held
sacred weapons to the sacred revealed to be unleashed upon the council of hell
blood flows down the streets at night where wolves cry out for flesh
where a horrible curse taints the woodlands nearby with the forms of the walking dead

unholy inversion of hope twisting the faith of the meek into hate
driven insane by the dark one to bring forth the foul biddings he speaks
the undead are among us at dawn they shrink back to their silken beds
they dance by night and drink the blood of a child's broken neck

Kermit's spires are growing taller still their shadows stretching throughout the land
freeing the evils that sleep within the weaker minds of man

into the tower never go the horrors multiply
gears can mince the strongest ones leaving heroes paralyzed
the rivers flow with poison the sands swallow you whole
the ghouls that roam this darkened wood are thirsting for your throat

Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
I'll fuck you with a rake.

Ecko wrote:Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
I'll fuck you with a rake.

Where is that from...

KTownEgghead wrote:

Ecko wrote:Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue,
I'll fuck you with a rake.

Where is that from...

Think KTown think.

XD EPICNESS!

Dear old egghead sat on a wall
he did not realize it would lead to his fall
For the good people of fans where severely pissed
even Echo was shaking his fist
As they declaired 'thats the last straw'
electro tomato punched him in the jaw
He tumbled down to the ground below
And stubbed his poor fragile big toe
And even though fans was still mad
and egghead was gone because of his dad('s lack of internet)
They welcomed him back to the land of frets
once he regained his internets
Now all are at amends
And all at fans are back to being friends

You do this to well.

Banhammer Smashed Face

There is something inside Ecko
It's coming out
He feels like banning you
Let loose of the anger, held back too long
His blood runs cold
Through his anatomy, dwells another being
Rooted in his cortex, a servant to its bidding
Brutality becomes his appetite
Violence is now a way of life
The sledge his tool to torture
As it pounds down on your forehead
Eyes bulging from the sockets
With every swing of his mallet
He smashes your fucking profile in, until nothing is left
Through the crack
Posting privileges do leak; distorted beauty,
Catastrophe steaming slop.
Splattered all over him
Lifeless profile, slouching dead
Lecherous abcess.
Where you once had a head
Avoiding the prophecy of
His new found lust
You will never live again,
Soon your life will end
He'll see you die at his feet, eternally he smashes your face
Facial bones collapse as he cracks your skull in half
Crushing, cranal, contents
Draining the snot, he rips out the eyes
Squeezing them in his hands nerves are incised
Peeling the flesh off the bottom of his weapon
Involuntarily pulpifying facil region
Suffer, and then you die
Torture, pulverised
At one with his sixth sense, he feels free
To kill as he pleases, No one can stop him
Created to kill, the carnage continues
Violently reshaping human facial tissue
Brutality becomes his appetite
Violence is now the way of life
The sledge his tool to torture
As it pounds down on your forehead

ELECTRO! ELECTRO!
We call him ELECBRO!
ELECTRO! ELECTRO!
He ain't just for sho'!

Reaching for the inner bright, the very essence-sun of my dreaming bliss
Guided by a fear blinded outside all shades of the perfect black
The scattered jigsaw of my redemption laid out before my eyes
Each piece as amorphous as the other - Each piece in its lack of shape a lie
BSRaven - the paragon of fear, an immobile skein of tangled nerves exposed
Hastily clawing my way into the darkest of my inner scenes of torture
I stay my breath to escape this slavery
I stay my breath to re-awake and face it encore
The struggle to free myself of restraints, becomes my very shackles
Non-physical smothering. Asphyxiation by oxygen hands
Drowning in the endless sky. An ever-downward dive, only to surface
the sewage of indecision, on which all sense of self is afloat
The vortex-acceleration a constant. Resolute in purpose its choking flow
My ignorance cast in the mold of all things absolute
I sustain forever my gaze. A stare fixed on the distant oblivion
Resting in the inverted state of being dead, non-sensory matter
As all the earth, the wind, the fire, the sea, and the BSRaven behold and learn to pity me
Mutiny of self. Insurrection games convincingly performed
Incapacitated by physical thoughts acting out the will of tendon and bone
Have the bridges of insanity been crossed and forever retracted?
Am I standing among a thousand selves? Is the multitude of laughters mine alone?
The feeding frenzy of my starving soul, gnawing voraciously at the bones,
the exo-skeletal patchwork protecting my own reflection within;
The twin-and-same engaged in the mirrored act of chewing away
at the shell of my attacking self. The paradox unseen
Treacherous this deceit to make no choice matter
To have and yet lose yourself, until finally all reasons why are forgotten
To live through ones own shadow. Mute and blinded, is to really see
Eclipse the golden mirror and the reflection is set free
So imminently visible - this cloaked innocent guilt
Sentenced to a lifetime, a second of structured chaos
Trampled by the ferocious, raging crowds of solitude
I'm the soil beneath me soaking up the sustenance of my own death
Extradited to BSRaven, the deity of all things random
Alive, multicolored, twitching in his dead monochrome world
Iridescent to the searhing eyes, I'm all things vivid in a world of grey
So easily spotted, so easily claimed in this domain where all is prey
My thoughts a radiant beacon to the omnidirectional hunter-god radar
I'm a markerlight of flesh to these subconscious carnivores
I am them. I am teeth. I'm their arousal at the kill
Feasting on self. A schizoreality warp. The contradiction fulfilled
Focus the only means to see me back to life's unending swirl
A reversal of passing away, as the world of dead, as away is now my origin
I float through physical thoughts. I stare down the abyss of organic dreams
All bets off, I plunge - Only to find that self is shed
A lie to maintain equilibrium, to hold me in this dead realm - this last ever dream
I'm the thought that never crossed my mind - disguised in the evident. Forever unredeemed
A new level reached, where the absence of air lets me breathe
I'm inverted electrical impulses. A malfunctioning death-code incomplete
All things before me, at first unliving glimpse undeciphered
Its semantics rid of logic. Nothing is all. All is contradiction
Grinding, churning - the sweetest ever noises
Decode me into their non-communication
A soundtrack to my failure, one syllable, one vowel
A stagnant flow of endings. Un-time unbound. Merging to form the multi-none
A sickly dance of matter, malignantly benign. Greeting the chasm - unbearable, sublime
Vision will blind. Severance ties. BSRaven am I. True are all lies.

Wow, great, you can plagiarize.

Zpj wrote:Wow, great, you can plagiarize.

That's not a poem.